将来の夢についての英作文をつくったのですが

Writer: admin Type: jracademy Date: 2019-01-06 00:00
将来の夢についての英作文をつくったのですが、あっているか見てほしいです。Hello,everyone.What do you want to be in the future?I want to be a scientist.I have two reasons.First,Ilike science.When I was a child,I went to a science musium.I learned a lot about science there and I became interested in science.Second,I'm in the science club.We do an experiment every week.It is very interesting.In conclusion,If I became a scientist,I want to make new medicine and help many peoples.I must study hard to be a scientist.Thank you for listening.共感した0###Hello, everyone. What do you want to be in the future? For me, I want to become a scientist, and I have two reasons why.First of all, I like science. When I was a child, I went to a science museum. I learned a lot about science there and I became interested in it.Secondly, I'm in a science club. We do experiments every week. It is very interesting.In conclusion, If I became a scientist, I want to make a new medicine and help many people. I must study hard to become a scientist. Thank you for listening.めちゃくちゃいいと思います! 句読点の後は絶対にスペースをあけてね。後はpeopleは複数の人て言う意味だから s は最後につけないよ。Secondly か Second of all, どっちでもいいよ勉強頑張ってね!ナイス0
###ごめん後 If I became a scientist は If I become a scientist
###ご回答ありがとうございました、勉強がんばります!

 

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